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: Headings are a great idea if there is complex or varied content. However in your case, you could also benefit from improved paragraph structure. For example, the first two paragraphs could

@Angela777

Headings are a great idea if there is complex or varied content. However in your case, you could also benefit from improved paragraph structure. For example, the first two paragraphs could be joined in order to relate your education to who you are. Overall, this provides the reader with a better understanding of who you are, while maintaining the flow of the discussion.

The paragraphs I am writing are good examples to use as a template. You can make a short statement with the first line, then follow up with a comparison, a contrast or additional information. This can be followed with one or two lines that provide examples or additional related information to better convey the message to your audience. Finally, end with a linking word to make a conclusion about what you have said.

Consider the following:


My name is Stacey and I'm a qualified engineer. I have attained a Bachelor of
Engineering, which has given me the knowledge and skills to design digital systems for the past five
years. Examples of systems I have designed include (...). In addition to
my technical knowledge, I am a native English speaker with a formal
education in professional English communication.


The first line hits home, saying who you are and what you do.
The second line explains why being a qualified engineer is relevant.
The third line provides examples that supports your technical expertise.
The final line links your technical skills with other professional skills.
Overall, the paragraph provides improved structure, flow and quality layout.

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