: Critique: Can anyone tell me how I can improve my website? I am a bit rubbish at CSS and have mainly based my website off another website, in hope it would look different, although it didn't.

@Lengel450

I guess this would be a start. Taking into account you based this website on another one and it turned out pretty much the same, you might wanna consider changing the colors and the font too.

Good luck.

PS: I took out your design on the upper right corner cause it had nothing to do with what's going on in your actual website design.

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@XinRu324

I would advise the following:


Grid alignment: Scoot your main content and top nav to the left so it lines up with "home page"
Content Justification: the secondary information on the right is calling a lot of attention to itself, I would change the blue to something less eye catching, and put more color emphasis on the main content somehow. Perhaps make it not as wide, or center both columns in the middle of the page.
Unified illustration style: The icon on the left is very different from the pixel style, if the pixel style is important, use it on all imagery, or have more uses of the icon style on the top left.


Best of luck!

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