: General feedback on first draft of site design I'm a developer having a bash at designing a church site for a relative and was hoping to get some feedback on what i've done so far. I tend

@Ogunnowo857

I don't like the photo treatment at all.

I'm entirely confused by what it is trying to communicate. You're showing domes and hills but talking about a specific church. You should then be showing that church, or at least more of it. It needs to be a good photo but one that people can identify with. Currently, the photo lacks any relevance because the focus is on some random domes directing your eye towards hills (and away from the logo).

In general it would probably serve better to be a photo that includes the point of entry.

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@Goswami567

Good job.

It's Nice and clean with lots of whitespace. I think the logo could be smaller and the picture bigger. I've never been to Edinburgh but the photo makes we want to go there.


I'm not entirely sure about how I've
used the banner image, as it's a good
image but I've had to crop it and cut
off one of the church spires.


I really like how you used the image except for the crop. Alan's idea is cool but to give you an alternate suggestion, try re cropping it but bigger. Let it fill up the space all the way to the top then select out everything above the mountain keeping the top of the spire. Move the nav either below the picture or as an overlay in the top right. Do the logo with a transparent background and make it smaller.

Pictures are better than words so here is a very quick and dirty rendition.

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@BetL875

The question is a wee bit vague, but to pick up the points that are specific:

The 2010 theme as you've modified it works well. The minimalist approach is appropriate to the subject and stays out of the way of the content.

If I were playing Art Director on this project, I'd suggest these changes:

Eyedropper one of the more saturated blues out of the banner image to use as a background for the widget tabs, and see if that doesn't add just enough so they don't look so drab. You could also take the logo (which works well in the context) and add it as a graphic element (not in red, possible a light gray).

The banner image itself should expand so the spire isn't cropped. It looks to me like the top of that spire will be just below and pointing to the site name, which will be a nice touch. The nav can overlay the image if you absolutely position it, maybe even nest the menu div inside the branding div. With a little fine tuning, the spire will fit neatly between the words "life" and "service". One of the less-talked-about tricks of design is to make things look deliberate, so it will appear you intended it that way all along. :-)

The sky in the image is rather drab-looking. I'd remove everything above the buildings on the left half, so that the spire rises into plain white. That will give the spire itself a subtle touch of symbolism that will work well for this project. You will probably need to feather out the sky on the right, to avoid a hard top edge -- it should fade out before it reaches the search field.

(On a personal note, I went to school in Edinburgh. Haven't been back in nearly 30 years, so that skyline is quite nostalgic.)

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