: Why doesn't my client like these designs? How can I improve them? I am doing a slider image which includes a lot of typography and yeah art and I am running out of ideas as to how to portray

@Kevin459

I cant tell you why he doesn't like it, I can tell you why i don't like it and perhaps that will help you.

I think all the text sizes are too hard too read.
I also think the red is hard to read. Try using it to accentuate a fact, and not so much for the over all design. Notice how your examples use red sparingly.
I also think that, because the rest of the rest of the design has a lot of color, the white space on the top is really noticeable.

I hope all this helps. Good luck.

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@Samaraweera207

Firstly, I think you need to properly define the hierarchy of your messages. This is how I would prioritise them:


Main Message and Proposition



'5% Early Order Discount'



Secondary Message and Support for Proposition



Free Storage for shipments in the fall.



Additional Information and Terms & Conditions



Expires 30th June
Promo Code 5EOD




Once you have the heirarchy defined, you have a basis for structuring the content. Additionally, I think that you could improve the structure of your messages and you're also missing one key component; a call to action.

Rearranging your primary message from '5% Early Order Discount' to 'Book Early to Save 5%' introduces a call-to-action with a very similar message. I would also reconsider your secondary message, because 'in the fall' is highly ambiguous; the fall to me is Autumn, and I have no idea when it starts or ends.

I think you've made a mistake by giving far too much space to your images that have very little meaning. It looks like you've squashed the text in as an afterthought. You're then wasting a lot of space at the bottom.

After examining the content closely, I think you're selling calendars, and if there's one thing we can agree on about calendars, it's that they usually have a similar look and structure. Taking inspiration from that would enable you to create a directly relevant theme.

Here is a quick mock up that could be immensely improved with some more subtle calendar characteristics:



Shortly after creating this I realised that there is one important piece of information missing; it doesn't say what your selling.

So with that in mind, I was able to easily adjust the theme to add in a message for anyone who doesn't understand what is being advertised.



What I'm trying to point out with these examples is that you don't need to use lots of pictures to get your message across. A little bit of structure and some brainstorming to find a relevant theme can lead you to creating a decent graphic that fulfils it's purpose and does so while looking ok.

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@Hamaas979

I'd strongly suggest using pinterest, heavily. It's an incredibly diverse resource for ideas and inspiration:
www.pinterest.com/search/pins/?q=discount%20sign
And perhaps change that font the "5" is in. That's one of the clumsier looking 5's I've seen in a while.

And having a client say "I don't like this..." is fantastic. A good thing. Ask him what he does like. Put it on him to demonstrate what he's fond of. If he's going to be making the call on what something should look like, pour it on him, properly.

Then mimic whatever he suggests.

The fastest ways to do this are pinterest and google search. Prepare a tonne of examples from all kinds of styles, throw them in a pinterest group and share them with him. Encourage him to do the same. Start a design conversation with him.

He's clearly got an opinion. That's good news. It works in your favour because nobody else is ever going to want to work with him, nor is anyone else going to take the time to understand what his tastes and flavours are.

Only once you know these things can you progressively advise him on how to improve things, within his chosen themes and stylings. etc.

As I say... start with pinterest. It's a whole new way of collating, curating and conversing about design that anyone can grok. Help him to help you to help him.

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