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: Does this poster convey femininity and multiculturalism? This poster I made for our multicultural womens evening. It should represent femininity, multi-cultural and be an eye-catcher to get many

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This poster I made for our multicultural womens evening. It should represent femininity, multi-cultural and be an eye-catcher to get many women to our event.

I know the colors are commonly used for multi-cultural identity, but it does not matter, because the most important that it is seen and recognized!

And please let me know if I have made some bad mistakes on the design.



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Thanks so much, here a edited version:


I'll answer in the comments!

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@Murray976

Really nice design! I think you definitely got the vibe right.

Couple of things to consider:


The email at the bottom, because the text is in the same font, it makes it a little difficult to read. If you made the first word bold, for example, that would separate it a little more.
I find the alignment of the date and the word Lauantai a little confusing. Maybe because of the colors, I would prefer to see a block of pink on the top and then the black grouped on the bottom.
I also find the 6 on the date a little too close to the blue drop, which works better for the rest of the text because it's in black.


Since you are going to be printing this, make sure your border gets printed (make it at least 10mm wide).

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