: Critique: iPhone Repair Poster I would love feedback on a poster I am making for "Techbox" local tech repair business. There are 3 poster boxes on the outside walls of the business with heavy

@Caterina889

I think that the logical, expected order of the three phones is not immediately apparent on first glance, and the explanatory text is necessary if you want to keep the current placement. Or you could move the shiny new phone down to the bottom to make for a more logical and easily recognized flow.

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@Ogunnowo857

How do you first read this poster? how does it flow?


The first thing I found was that its awkward and had to search for #1 then #2 and so on. IF you're going to have a numbered list the design needs to be reconsidered so that they go in a sequential order from top to bottom. Not 1 on top right, 2 on bottom middle, and 3 back at the top.


Is the use of text redundant and unnecessary?


It is somewhat clear but not so clear I'd say the text is redundant.


What could be Added/Removed to give a more focused message?


Simplify the message. One statement somewhere in the middle area by what looks kind of like a cutting board. Maybe, "iPhone Repair" "Phone Repair" "Phone Restoration" "Screen Replacement" --- I don't know. But one bold tagline would be better for this design IMO than 3 unordered numbers.

Update

On your updated poster I think its a big improvement. I might remove a few scraps and enlarge the tagline though. Looks good though.

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@Heady304

It looks very good. Everyone can clearly understand the service without the 3 step explanation. The cracked iPhone could look more like a shattered glass plate, rather than a textured surface. I don't like the copy (and the order of 3,1,2) because it is unnecessary. The logo on the fixed iPhone is gauche. That large logo on the iPhone makes me subconsciously think that TechBox owns the "shiny new" phone ... I would therefore want to take my broken iPhone to the Apple 'mother-ship' instead.

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