: Critique: How can I improve my logo? I am a noob to photoshop, however I have been able to make this, I have a liking for minimalism : More about the company: Aims to help people by raising

@Harper654

For me that black color feels slightly eye hurting, because when we look at this then it seems that all the attention is drawn towards the black color.

And the font goes against the minimalism. I have changed the color slightly and got this.

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@RJPawlick971

Work on scale. The type vs. the logomark, for example. How would this look printed at 50%? You'd hardly be able to read the type.

Why the overlap? Why the shadow? These aren't bad, per se, but when you say you like minimalism, these would typically be seen as superfluous to that.

What's the thought behind the typeface? do you feel the loose script face works well with the very geometric mark?

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