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@Murray976

Just suggestions... based upon my opinion....

Reducing the size of the S goes a long way for balance...



Combine the reduction of the S and then shift the R to connect with the K rather then a b.... and I think it's much more balanced.

quickly painted and far from perfect.

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@Sarah814

Let it be. It's fine. See it in a context - for example with some performance instruments:



Without anything else it's different. If you want to try to change something, do as others have suggested, try a stronger P (=against the big S)

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@Ogunnowo857

Looks like the first character (P) needs to be made a little bit bigger. Perhaps lengthen the stem to make it relatively taller.

That should help to balance out the low-hanging 'S' on the end too.

Maybe it's just me but it seems like that 'P' could also be kerned over to the left slightly as well...

Looks pretty good overall though!

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@Annie732

You could possibly extend the bottom of the M down to be level with the bottom of the Y and S.

I think this would balance it quite well.

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@Karen819

I would try using a simple/clean geometric shape as a border or parallel lines.

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